Comments on: First Screen Cast Attempt http://tdhurst.com/screen-cast-attempt Failure is my muse. Tue, 22 May 2012 18:01:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: tdhurst http://tdhurst.com/screen-cast-attempt/comment-page-1#comment-2132 tdhurst Wed, 14 Jul 2010 00:57:20 +0000 http://tdhurst.com/?p=3192#comment-2132 Thanks. Exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for.<br><br>And no, the is not the final version. Thanks. Exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for.

And no, the is not the final version.

]]> By: Evo Terra http://tdhurst.com/screen-cast-attempt/comment-page-1#comment-2131 Evo Terra Wed, 14 Jul 2010 00:47:18 +0000 http://tdhurst.com/?p=3192#comment-2131 First attempt? You did great. Some thoughts on next time:<br><br>* Instead of "Next we have the Photos tab. We use photo albums to keep track of all the cool things...", turn that around. More about you: "Red Ledges Utah is a beautiful spot. We collect photos we take and customers take and upload them to Facebook in albums. You can access these from the Photos tab".<br><br>* Less conversation, more scripting. Yeah, that goes against the nature of discussion. But to me, this should be more polished. You're voice and tone are great. I think it will reach more people without as much (and there wasn't that much) off hand comments. Don't go all "announcer guy" on us. See anything Dr. Pamela Gay does (podcast, video, etc) for an example of the happy medium.<br><br>* Needs and ending tag. A credit roll, if you will. Expect this to be viewed off of YouTube. Throw your URL up there at the end. Or better yet, the URL to the FB page. First attempt? You did great. Some thoughts on next time:

* Instead of “Next we have the Photos tab. We use photo albums to keep track of all the cool things…”, turn that around. More about you: “Red Ledges Utah is a beautiful spot. We collect photos we take and customers take and upload them to Facebook in albums. You can access these from the Photos tab”.

* Less conversation, more scripting. Yeah, that goes against the nature of discussion. But to me, this should be more polished. You're voice and tone are great. I think it will reach more people without as much (and there wasn't that much) off hand comments. Don't go all “announcer guy” on us. See anything Dr. Pamela Gay does (podcast, video, etc) for an example of the happy medium.

* Needs and ending tag. A credit roll, if you will. Expect this to be viewed off of YouTube. Throw your URL up there at the end. Or better yet, the URL to the FB page.

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